In Poetics, Aristotle said — yes, I’m smart like that, quoting Aristotle — we move from ignorance to knowledge, from enmity to friendship, from neutrality to commitment.
Lynne Barrett taught this juicy class on plot at the International Women’s Writing Guild this week at Yale.
In stories, she said, everyone has to have a piece of the puzzle. No one character can hold the whole story.
Lynne gave us the timeline from the movie, Casablanca (which I’ve never seen) in which Bogart’s character moves from nonchalance to commitment.
The flashbacks in the story move the story forward. People don’t just ruminate on their past for no reason. The lover’s past (in Paris!) sparks an understanding that propels them to take action.
In all narratives, a reversal is necessary. Cinderella goes from low status to high status. I always taught this in my drama classes, that this is what makes for comedy — a high-status character becomes low-status — or visa versa.
This is why Lynne said the story of Spitzer is a better plot than the story of Schwarzenegger. He fell from the top, not when he’d left office.
But the reversal is not just “who’s up and who’s down.” A secret become public. A single person becomes married.
This class nudged me to reconsider the lame plot in my young adult novel from last year’s NaNoWriMo (national novel writing month).
When I mentioned to Lynne, I had a novel, written in one month, she said, “Yes, Chris Baty, the founder of NaNoWriMo, wrote the book. No Plot, No Problem. No plot? Big problem!”
Incidentally, Barrett taught with my friend Dan Wakefield at Florida International University.
This is a great primer for writing. Can I post it on my books and writing site with attribution?
How do I do this?
http://islandinthepacificbooks.blogspot.com/
Jim
I liked the way Wired to Care attributed me:
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